Monday 19th January 2015 Lesson Review

As it is tweak week this week, I have begun looking at my feedback to improve my final product. Today I was working on my contents page and I have included a before and after photo below of it. I have added descriptions to my stories to give the reader more detail (unlike the story names, these descriptions are not in full capitals, this is because I want the titles to give the most impact to the reader, and with the competition descriptions, I have added explanation marks at the end, to give impact as well as the titles), I have added a line across the top of my page, I noticed that Kerrang often do this, and it filled out the gap that was previously there. I have also changed my name in the editors column to a handwriting style font to give the impression that I have signed the page myself. And, I have also added a page number to the bottom corner of my page. Along side this, I added an extra page to the 'Ultimate Gig Review' section to fill out some space, and I changed the colour of the text inside the boxes under my images of Kevin Skaff and Parker Cannon so you could see it better (it was previously Black).